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Post by Deleted on Jul 11, 2014 10:39:44 GMT -5
He opened an eye weakly. "Am..." He coughed. "Am I in StarClan?" Lightpaw was panicking. "What did you say to him! Why would he do that? He's going to die! Why would he try to kill himself?!"
(So, I liked Ridgey when I made him but I really won't have fun doing anything with him except this thread right here. I just can't really do his personality. Anyways, I already thought that he would tell someone and either leave the clan and become a loner or he would end up dying. I just got kind of annoyed with him so that's why he kind of freaked out and went crazy.).
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Post by Snowflower on Jul 12, 2014 7:58:57 GMT -5
(So I guess this is his death thread?)
"Ridgepaw, you aren't dying," Snowflower said patiently. "Lightpaw, all I told him was that the choice to tell you was his. Duskpaw would forgive him. I never said anything about jumping off a cliff. Help me carry him. If we get to camp in time, he'll be okay..." Her trailing sentence was the only sign that she was internally panicking.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 12, 2014 9:04:05 GMT -5
(Well...if you put it that way then yeah. I want to start over with a different SkyClan charrie because Ridgey didn't end up being as awesome as I hoped.)
He closed his eye. "You won't be able to get me back. Not anytime soon." He weakly tried to lick some of the blood off his paws.
Lightpaw paced in circles, completely panicking. "Why is he so calm? He shouldn't be this calm about it. RIDGEPAW WAKE UP! YOU'RE GOING TO LIVE!"
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Post by Snowflower on Jul 12, 2014 20:15:31 GMT -5
(Alright. THis post will be the last, I guess. This was fun!)
"Lightpaw..." Snowflower looked at the ground. "It's his time to go. Duskpaw is waiting for him." Reaching over, Snowflower licked his head one last time. "Ridgepaw, you will not be remembered as the cat who killed his brother. You will be remembered as the cat who gave up his life to see his brother again." She hoped he died quickly, not wanting him to suffer any longer. Picking him up, she beckoned to Lightpaw and slowly trekked up the mountain. Ridgepaw would be remembered as a brave cat, she was sure.
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