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Post by owlishdragon11 on Jul 12, 2014 22:28:14 GMT -5
Name: Frostdawn
Name Reasoning: Frost-Her littermates both died in the first frost of leafbare, and her pure white coat. Dawn- She is very cheerful and optimistic.
Gender: She-cat
Age: 27 moons.
Position: Deputy
Clan: SkyClan
Capability Stats:- Speed: 2/5
- Stamina: 3/5
- Physical Strength: 3/5
- Mental Strength: 4/5
Strengths: She is very compassionate and optimistic, liked by almost everyone she meets. She is a smart fighter, and knows how to determine her opponent's weaknesses. She can keep her temper well, so she can cope with Badgerstar flying off the handle. She doesn't act like she is any more important than her ing dirty work and forging relationships.
Weaknesses: She is slow and tires quickly so she isn't a great fighter unless she take full advantage of what she has. She has WindClan blood so she is occasionally resented for that. She often has to retreat from her post and lay low for a while to regain her calm after Badgerstar has been acting up. She is sometimes too nice to do what she has to do, always letting cats off rather than punish them, even if they need it. She feels they get punished enough by their leader.
Adaptations: Type 1 (Clan: SkyClan+WindClan) She has the paws and light colored fur of SkyClan but she is built like a WindClanner and has the tail of a WindClanner.
Description: Frostdawn has pure white fur and an unusual genetic defect where one of her eyes is icy blue and the other is deep green. Her fur is short because of her WindClan blood but it is thick and warm. She has large paws with hard paws and strong, short claws. She is also thin and long-legged, built like a WindClanner, though she didn't inherit their running skills. She also has a tail that is shorter than most.
Personality: Frostdawn has always been very loving and compassionate, the opposite of Badgerstar, and in fact when she was a kit she wanted to be the medicine cat apprentice. However, she did not and eventually became a warrior and then the deputy of SkyClan. She is incredibly optimistic and helpful, always looking for the silver lining and helping others to see the glass half full. Her bright spirit is sorely needed during Badgerstar's violent, unpredictable leadership. Frostdawn is very independent in the sense that she never tells her problems to anyone, though she will listen to anyone else. She is also skilled at managing time so she can do her jobs while still usually being available to talk to instead of anyone having to go to Badgerstar.
Specific Moral Values: Look on the bright side and don't burden others with your problems.
History: Frostkit was born to Ashnose and Cloudfur along with two sisters, Finchkit and Gustkit. Her mother was half WindClan, because Cloudfur's father had been a WindClan warrior. Cloudfur was a type two WindClan, with just enough SkyClan adaptations to survive. Finchkit and Gustkit both took after her, and their fur wasn't thick enough. When they were four moons old they both died in the first frost of leafbare, but Frostkit survived because she was type one WindClan and SkyClan. Her mother left the clan out of grief, she felt guilty because she had given birth to her two dead kits in an environment where a WindClan cat would die. Cloudfur couldn't bear to be around her remaining daughter. Frostkit spent the next two moons creating a close relationship with her father until she became Frostpaw and couldn't be around him as much. They still love each other dearly though he is an elder now. She was a good apprentice, learning quickly and performing well. She passed with flying colors and became a warrior under the previous leader. She did her job well until no one thought twice about her having WindClan blood. When Badgerstar became leader, she became his deputy, though she never found out why. All she knows is that she is glad to be there for the cats that Badgerstar has lashed out at and actually managed to save a cat he thought he had killed, smuggling them out of the clan to their friend in ShadowClan.
Relationships: Ashnose-She is his daughter-Alive-Elder Cloudfur-She is her daughter-unknown-loner Badgerstar-She is his deputy-alive-leader Finchkit/Gustkit-She is their sister-dead-kit
Featured In: Watching (Shadow) Secrets (Ridgepaw) A peculiar friend... (Shadow)
SomenamethatItotallyforget (Hollowfang) Hunting (Eagleclaw)
Assignments: None
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Post by FENRIS on Jul 14, 2014 16:17:05 GMT -5
Hello darlin!!! Rad bio, Frostdawn seems like a hella Deputy u v u My only concerns are the name Mooncatcher needs to be changed, the moon is very important to the Clans and it'd be like calling her God o: Also Catcher doesn't describe her oh gosh. I'm just being picky but -Dawn will have to be changed too as it doesn't describe her. Here is a nice list of Suffixes the Admins go by, if you can't pick one maybe we can compromise something!! And lastly, we don't allow cats to have traits from two Clans. I think the rule was the kids inherited the adaptations from the parent with the higher level traits. It's nbd, I'm sure you can figure something out u v u Good luck!!
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Post by owlishdragon11 on Jul 14, 2014 17:18:15 GMT -5
Don't have time to fix it all right now but I will say the dawn thing is me googling suffixes and it said that meant optimistic and cheerful. Also I will fix Mooncatcher, I totally forgit that moon is kind of unacceptable. Is Cloudfur okay? And is there any way I can show that she is part WindClan? Like if she had all SkyClan fur/paws/whatever but built like a WindClanner? Or is that still againsy the rules? And is there somewhere that says what clans border each other, like the lay of the land with boundaries and such?
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Post by FENRIS on Jul 15, 2014 10:52:24 GMT -5
Alright, just change Mooncatcher and I'll let you keep the other stuff.
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Post by owlishdragon11 on Jul 15, 2014 16:43:23 GMT -5
Ok thank you :-)
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Post by FENRIS on Jul 15, 2014 16:56:30 GMT -5
accepted
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